Revision and Self-Editing for Publication
by James Scott Bell · James Scott Bell
Novelist and writing teacher James Scott Bell's two-part guide: a self-editing section on characters, plot, structure, scenes, dialogue, and theme, followed by a step-by-step revision process with checklists for turning a finished first draft into a manuscript ready for submission.
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